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Switch 03-23-2007 03:18 AM

New pistols (first GFX attempt by me) any sugestions?
 
Okay well I was doodling in Photoshop and came out with the side view of a gun so I decided "What the ****, I'll make a complete gun GFX!". Although it looks similar to a RP and/or BP RP and BP were NOT a template. It was JUST a doodle at first. Also if I see you using this ANYWHERE (unless making your own color version to post RIGHT ON THIS THREAD AND NO WHERE ELSE) without my permission or I will report you so quickly you couldn't change my mind. I'll need suggestions like color, where to put detail, and so forth. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM ONLY for the template (unless acompliment ;)), nothing more.
Note: Farthest left is left view, right of that is right view. Farthest right is front view, left of that is back view. Also I didn't decide on the size first so they're not pixel sized right now.

Dante55555 03-23-2007 03:22 AM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292000)
Okay well I was doodling in Photoshop and came out with the side view of a gun so I decided "What the ****, I'll make a complete gun GFX!". Although it looks similar to a RP and/or BP RP and BP were NOT a template. It was JUST a doodle at first. Also if I see you using this ANYWHERE (unless making your own color version to post RIGHT ON THIS THREAD AND NO WHERE ELSE) without my permission or I will report you so quickly you couldn't change my mind. I'll need suggestions like color, where to put detail, and so forth. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM ONLY for the template (unless acompliment ;)), nothing more.
Note: Farthest left is left view, right of that is right view. Farthest right is front view, left of that is back view. Also I didn't decide on the size first so they're not pixel sized right now.

It looks like a hair dryer... Im guessing that its not surposed to be all white then? Make the height smaller, i suggest it to be gray/black like all weapons lol. Maybe have some Green/Blue/Red buttons on it too. But yea, your hairdryer looks cool xD

pooper200000 03-23-2007 03:31 AM

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Originally Posted by Dante55555 (Post 1292005)
It looks like a hair dryer... Im guessing that its not surposed to be all white then? Make the height smaller, i suggest it to be gray/black like all weapons lol. Maybe have some Green/Blue/Red buttons on it too. But yea, your hairdryer looks cool xD

Height shorter. I want some color before i critisize. Hairdryer of extra hot air!

Switch 03-23-2007 03:34 AM

LOL I'll name it "Hair Pistols" XD
I can't make it shorter without distorting it, that's the problem...

Crono 03-23-2007 11:49 AM

the only thing that looks right is the perspective

apart from that...

0.5/10

kia345 03-23-2007 04:24 PM

i could see that looking eceptionally badass with the right colors

haunter 03-23-2007 04:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1292105)
the only thing that looks right is the perspective

apart from that...

0.5/10

The perspective isn't right either. The up/down sprites have no depth. Neither do the left/right ones, but that's common in Graal sprites.

Crono 03-23-2007 05:11 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter (Post 1292165)
The perspective isn't right either. The up/down sprites have no depth. Neither do the left/right ones, but that's common in Graal sprites.

Atleast it looks proper in the back view. Look at the ones on zone, you can see the hole the bullets come out of, lol.

zephirot 03-23-2007 06:36 PM

what
the
****.

Dante55555 03-23-2007 07:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1292105)
the only thing that looks right is the perspective

apart from that...

0.5/10

Ouch, thats low man :(

Crow 03-23-2007 07:44 PM

Not Graal's perspective, way too big, not colored yet...dunno, I guess I somehow dislike it o.O

Switch 03-23-2007 09:47 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter (Post 1292165)
The perspective isn't right either. The up/down sprites have no depth. Neither do the left/right ones, but that's common in Graal sprites.

NOT COLORED YET! Color GIVES the depth you retard.

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Originally Posted by kia345 (Post 1292162)
i could see that looking eceptionally badass with the right colors

YUUUUUUUP...

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Originally Posted by Crow (Post 1292226)
Not Graal's perspective, way too big, not colored yet...dunno, I guess I somehow dislike it o.O

I explained the too big part. -_- Graal's perspective is stupid because it doesn't have the real up and down things compared to bodies and stuff... That's one of the things I hate about Graal.

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST GFX ATTEMPT! JESUS!!!

pooper200000 03-23-2007 09:55 PM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292294)
NOT COLORED YET! Color GIVES the depth you retard.



YUUUUUUUP...



I explained the too big part. -_- Graal's perspective is stupid because it doesn't have the real up and down things compared to bodies and stuff... That's one of the things I hate about Graal.

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST GFX ATTEMPT! JESUS!!!

can you color it now at least?

Switch 03-23-2007 10:28 PM

I'm making it orange now with some cool stuffs :)

pooper200000 03-23-2007 10:35 PM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292316)
I'm making it orange now with some cool stuffs :)

post it

Switch 03-23-2007 11:01 PM

Won't be done for a bit I need a break on it, my colors aren't working good for me right now...

Huwajux 03-24-2007 01:28 PM

Why did you post an unfinished piece of work in the "Submissions" forum?

godofwarares 03-24-2007 02:06 PM

They're quite fat, aren't they? Go to Zone and look at those pistols and get ideas.

haunter 03-24-2007 04:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292294)
NOT COLORED YET! Color GIVES the depth you retard.

I can see that it's not coloured, I wasn't talking about shading. I was talking about shape. Perspective gives depth 'retard'.

You just made the top of my 'holy ****' list. You'd better hold onto something.

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1292174)
Atleast it looks proper in the back view. Look at the ones on zone, you can see the hole the bullets come out of, lol.

Actually it looks like it's facing directly behind the weapon when Graal obviously has a slanted camera angle. I figured out what it was once while working on some big image. I can't remember what the ratio was.

Switch 03-24-2007 05:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Huwajux (Post 1292536)
Why did you post an unfinished piece of work in the "Submissions" forum?

For suggestions, duh :asleep:

killerogue 03-24-2007 06:43 PM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292000)
Also if I see you using this ANYWHERE (unless making your own color version to post RIGHT ON THIS THREAD AND NO WHERE ELSE) without my permission or I will report you so quickly you couldn't change my mind.

Lol, I find this funny seeing that it's ugly as hell. >.>


Also, you can give depth with just white and black outlines. <.<

hampy 03-24-2007 07:16 PM

is that a joke? i hope it is

Crono 03-24-2007 07:43 PM

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Originally Posted by haunter (Post 1292571)
Actually it looks like it's facing directly behind the weapon when Graal obviously has a slanted camera angle. I figured out what it was once while working on some big image. I can't remember what the ratio was.

ah, i was judging it by what it was, not by what its going to be used for. :X

pooper200000 03-24-2007 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292594)
For suggestions, duh :asleep:

he put it in the zone forums because he wants zone player opinons because he is making a zone themed like server?

Huwajux 03-24-2007 09:14 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000 (Post 1292674)
he put it in the zone forums because he wants zone player opinons because he is making a zone themed like server?

Uh, no. Submissions are for submissions. You want advice? Post in the Graphics section.

Switch 03-24-2007 10:55 PM

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Originally Posted by pooper200000 (Post 1292674)
he put it in the zone forums because he wants zone player opinons because he is making a zone themed like server?

No my server's being modern+futuristic, like, jetpacks and hovercars and a new system that we're going to make: a bus system that yu have to pay for.

killerogue 03-25-2007 06:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292715)
No my server's being modern+futuristic, like, jetpacks and hovercars and a new system that we're going to make: a bus system that yu have to pay for.

I.E. Zone-like.

Stephen 03-25-2007 06:19 AM

I personally enjoy the design - in fact I think it has a lot of potential. We'll just see how you present your final image :)

xXziroXx 03-25-2007 07:46 AM

Reminds me of the needle gun in Halo.

pooper200000 03-25-2007 05:48 PM

Can you post it now? The finished one?

Switch 03-25-2007 09:50 PM

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Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1292835)
Reminds me of the needle gun in Halo.

LOL I KNOW! :p I never even thought of that til I saw this post, though XD maybe I should color it the same? Same bullets? ^^
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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1292828)
I personally enjoy the design - in fact I think it has a lot of potential. We'll just see how you present your final image :)

Yea when it's completely done it's gonna be awesome :D
Quote:

Originally Posted by pooper200000 (Post 1292893)
Can you post it now? The finished one?

x_x I'm working on it... x_x

JimDubbs 03-26-2007 01:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Switch (Post 1292294)
NOT COLORED YET! Color GIVES the depth you retard.



YUUUUUUUP...



I explained the too big part. -_- Graal's perspective is stupid because it doesn't have the real up and down things compared to bodies and stuff... That's one of the things I hate about Graal.

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST GFX ATTEMPT! JESUS!!!


YOU ASKED FOR PEOPLES OPINIONS AND THEY GAVE YOU OPINIONS BASED ON WHAT YOU POSTED..JESUS!!

Personal Jesus 03-26-2007 02:51 AM

I thought it was a thumbs down

MysticX2X 03-26-2007 06:45 AM

Wow thats one of the worst attempted graphics i seen in my life. Im being serious here. It looks like a half assed job and not even close to finished. Add color to it first though and change the shape/size of it.

SayianOozaru 03-26-2007 08:03 AM

Reminds me of that ice gun or w/e from un.

The one that was givin out with the xmas package 2 christmas's ago.

ChaosTika 03-26-2007 01:53 PM

The shape is somewhat cool...

Gothika 03-27-2007 10:02 AM

If this was your first attempt at a GFX.. How did you become a Great GFXer in 2006?

Demisis_P2P 03-27-2007 10:07 AM

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Originally Posted by Gothika (Post 1293585)
If this was your first attempt at a GFX.. How did you become a Great GFXer in 2006?

Sorry dude, he doesn't become good at excuses or explanations until 2008. :noob:

Switch 04-01-2007 11:24 PM

It says Okay GFXer, not Great. I can't do guns, this being my first, but I can do other stuff x_x

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Originally Posted by Demisis_P2P (Post 1293586)
Sorry dude, he doesn't become good at excuses or explanations until 2008. :noob:

Read above you :noob: <<------- try to remember that's what you are m'kay?


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