New pistols (first GFX attempt by me) any sugestions?
 

Okay well I was doodling in Photoshop and came out with the side view of a gun so I decided "What the ****, I'll make a complete gun GFX!". Although it looks similar to a RP and/or BP RP and BP were NOT a template. It was JUST a doodle at first. Also if I see you using this ANYWHERE (unless making your own color version to post RIGHT ON THIS THREAD AND NO WHERE ELSE) without my permission or I will report you so quickly you couldn't change my mind. I'll need suggestions like color, where to put detail, and so forth. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISISM ONLY for the template (unless acompliment ;)), nothing more.
Note: Farthest left is left view, right of that is right view. Farthest right is front view, left of that is back view. Also I didn't decide on the size first so they're not pixel sized right now.

It looks like a hair dryer... Im guessing that its not surposed to be all white then? Make the height smaller, i suggest it to be gray/black like all weapons lol. Maybe have some Green/Blue/Red buttons on it too. But yea, your hairdryer looks cool xD

Height shorter. I want some color before i critisize. Hairdryer of extra hot air!

LOL I'll name it "Hair Pistols" XD
I can't make it shorter without distorting it, that's the problem...

the only thing that looks right is the perspective

apart from that...

0.5/10

i could see that looking eceptionally badass with the right colors

The perspective isn't right either. The up/down sprites have no depth. Neither do the left/right ones, but that's common in Graal sprites.

Atleast it looks proper in the back view. Look at the ones on zone, you can see the hole the bullets come out of, lol.

what
the
****.

Ouch, thats low man :(

Not Graal's perspective, way too big, not colored yet...dunno, I guess I somehow dislike it o.O

NOT COLORED YET! Color GIVES the depth you retard.

YUUUUUUUP...

I explained the too big part. -_- Graal's perspective is stupid because it doesn't have the real up and down things compared to bodies and stuff... That's one of the things I hate about Graal.

GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST GFX ATTEMPT! JESUS!!!

can you color it now at least?

I'm making it orange now with some cool stuffs :)

post it

Won't be done for a bit I need a break on it, my colors aren't working good for me right now...

Why did you post an unfinished piece of work in the "Submissions" forum?

They're quite fat, aren't they? Go to Zone and look at those pistols and get ideas.

I can see that it's not coloured, I wasn't talking about shading. I was talking about shape. Perspective gives depth 'retard'.

You just made the top of my 'holy ****' list. You'd better hold onto something.

Actually it looks like it's facing directly behind the weapon when Graal obviously has a slanted camera angle. I figured out what it was once while working on some big image. I can't remember what the ratio was.

For suggestions, duh :asleep:

Lol, I find this funny seeing that it's ugly as hell. >.>


Also, you can give depth with just white and black outlines. <.<

is that a joke? i hope it is

ah, i was judging it by what it was, not by what its going to be used for. :X

he put it in the zone forums because he wants zone player opinons because he is making a zone themed like server?

Uh, no. Submissions are for submissions. You want advice? Post in the Graphics section.

No my server's being modern+futuristic, like, jetpacks and hovercars and a new system that we're going to make: a bus system that yu have to pay for.

I.E. Zone-like.

I personally enjoy the design - in fact I think it has a lot of potential. We'll just see how you present your final image :)

Reminds me of the needle gun in Halo.

Can you post it now? The finished one?

LOL I KNOW! :p I never even thought of that til I saw this post, though XD maybe I should color it the same? Same bullets? ^^
Yea when it's completely done it's gonna be awesome :D
x_x I'm working on it... x_x

YOU ASKED FOR PEOPLES OPINIONS AND THEY GAVE YOU OPINIONS BASED ON WHAT YOU POSTED..JESUS!!

I thought it was a thumbs down

Wow thats one of the worst attempted graphics i seen in my life. Im being serious here. It looks like a half assed job and not even close to finished. Add color to it first though and change the shape/size of it.

Reminds me of that ice gun or w/e from un.

The one that was givin out with the xmas package 2 christmas's ago.

The shape is somewhat cool...

If this was your first attempt at a GFX.. How did you become a Great GFXer in 2006?

Sorry dude, he doesn't become good at excuses or explanations until 2008. :noob:

It says Okay GFXer, not Great. I can't do guns, this being my first, but I can do other stuff x_x

Read above you :noob: <<------- try to remember that's what you are m'kay?