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DustyPorViva 03-09-2007 12:37 PM

Some stuff
 
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Boredom reigns... so I thought I'd pixel again and this is what my doodling resulted in. Dunno if I'll keep working on it, maybe, depending on how I feel. Thought I'd try to stray away from realistic tiling for a change and mess around with another kind of style. Anyways, crack away at it if you like.
(by the by, I do notice the bottom of the shrub blends in with the grass... I just don't have an easy way of messing around with the colour of it right now.)

Crono 03-09-2007 12:57 PM

mountains remind me of mario rpg for some reason hehe, looks ok so far

Tom 03-09-2007 04:41 PM

Nice :O another awesome pixel artist. You should so finish the cliff, it would look amasing if they have a little more work on them :D

Crow 03-09-2007 04:49 PM

You should give the cliffs a texture, they look pretty weird right now.

DustyPorViva 03-09-2007 08:49 PM

I'm not exactly sure what to do with the cliffs right now. I'm not sure how to give them some texture without really stepping over the limit for the style. I'll probably try to do something like I did with the block.

DustyPorViva 03-09-2007 09:20 PM

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Well this is what I've got with the cliff as far as detailing it goes.
(EDIT: there, finished the cliffs completely.)

Elk 03-09-2007 09:33 PM

looks ok

Infernix 03-10-2007 12:02 AM

Cliffs looks nice and simple, 3 colors from what I see. Same colors Elk used in his unfinished rock boss thing.

DustyPorViva 03-10-2007 12:06 AM

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Well the first one was 3 colors, but in the edit I added more to give the a bit more depth. And as far as same colors go, I used no references, colors are hand-picked.

(EDIT: Added some stuff, fence, flower, rock... I'm really starting to run out of ideas.)

James 03-10-2007 01:28 AM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1286683)
mountains remind me of mario rpg for some reason hehe, looks ok so far

STOP READING MY THOUGHTS. :mad:

And that's really hot. You should make a tileset with that style. Reminds me of Fai's pixeling.

Crono 03-10-2007 02:25 AM

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Originally Posted by DustyPorViva (Post 1286871)
Well the first one was 3 colors, but in the edit I added more to give the a bit more depth. And as far as same colors go, I used no references, colors are hand-picked.

(EDIT: Added some stuff, fence, flower, rock... I'm really starting to run out of ideas.)

cool

make the two grass blades like on the tileset, swamps, :)

DustyPorViva 03-10-2007 04:41 AM

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Came up with this... not sure what I'm going to do with it. Large spaces like the house roof and wall are really hard to fill when you're trying to go with minimal detail and simplistic style... Anyways, ya a lot of the colors are the same and they're just fillers to give it shape and give me an idea of what's what. Still a lot of work to do with this.

Draenin 03-10-2007 06:36 AM

Just make the shingles kinda messy looking like you did the mountainside.

Elk 03-10-2007 01:37 PM

looks nice

youre good
since you dont use outlines anymore...not like most of the artists here

Tom 03-10-2007 02:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1287022)
looks nice

youre good
since you dont use outlines anymore...not like most of the artists here


You use outlines 0_o Alot of good artists use outlines. Silly.

Also, nice stuff dude I <3 this thread :P

Crono 03-10-2007 02:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Elk (Post 1287022)
looks nice

youre good
since you dont use outlines anymore...not like most of the artists here

yeah im sure the artists behind sonic the hedgehog just SUCK because they use outlines right?

DustyPorViva 03-10-2007 03:11 PM

I don't think he's trying to say outlines suck, but maybe it's just something new to look at for a change?

DustyPorViva 03-10-2007 03:54 PM

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Anyways... house nearly completed except for things like windows and other object-type stuff that needs to be added and detailing a few things like the support stones.

Infernix 03-10-2007 04:03 PM

Now add some textures bud.

Stephen 03-10-2007 04:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1287044)
yeah im sure the artists behind sonic the hedgehog just SUCK because they use outlines right?

You'll note that the lines of Sonic vary in width, which implies depth and contour (they're called contour lines). You'll also note they aren't limited to the outside but also define inner-objects (such as his eyebrows, for example).

Crono 03-10-2007 04:24 PM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1287067)
You'll note that the lines of Sonic vary in width, which implies depth and contour (they're called contour lines). You'll also note they aren't limited to the outside but also define inner-objects (such as his eyebrows, for example).

I dont care theres black outlines on the outside damnit. >:[

Stephen 03-10-2007 04:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1287074)
I dont care theres black outlines on the outside damnit. >:[

I'm afraid that these are the details which make up art; the specifics.

Elk 03-10-2007 07:22 PM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1287067)
You'll note that the lines of Sonic vary in width, which implies depth and contour (they're called contour lines). You'll also note they aren't limited to the outside but also define inner-objects (such as his eyebrows, for example).

you sir, are my translator now


btw very nice

Crono 03-10-2007 09:00 PM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1287094)
I'm afraid that these are the details which make up art; the specifics.

Oh so when you say "LOL I MEANT 2 DO OUTLINEZ AS ART" it's nice but when you don't mention it its looked down upon. :(

smirt362 03-10-2007 09:02 PM

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Originally Posted by DustyPorViva (Post 1287052)
Anyways... house nearly completed except for things like windows and other object-type stuff that needs to be added and detailing a few things like the support stones.

That looks really nice.

Stephen 03-10-2007 09:06 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1287194)
Oh so when you say "LOL I MEANT 2 DO OUTLINEZ AS ART"

Please reference your supposed quoted material. :)

Crono 03-10-2007 10:09 PM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1287198)
Please reference your supposed quoted material. :)

its not quoted, im pretending a random noob said that.

Stephen 03-10-2007 10:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Gerami (Post 1287226)
its not quoted, im pretending a random noob said that.

Regardless, I was pointing out the distinct difference between outlines and contour lines.

Crono 03-10-2007 11:14 PM

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Originally Posted by Stephen (Post 1287235)
Regardless, I was pointing out the distinct difference between outlines and contour lines.

And I'm suggesting if you simply state your outline is artistic it's ok, waiting for you to disprove it with a reason so my n00b head would learn. ;[

DustyPorViva 03-13-2007 02:42 AM

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Small, but an update. Running out of ideas, well... have ideas, but having a hard time executing them.

Anyways.

Infernix 03-13-2007 02:49 AM

you just cant have the water like that because it does not seem to fit the perspective of everything.

DustyPorViva 03-13-2007 02:55 AM

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Um... why not? What's out of perspective?
EDIT: and this would be said perspective, better defined.

Rapidwolve 03-13-2007 03:04 AM

I don't know why but those rocks or cliffs (brown things) or whatever they are look weird to me

Infernix 03-13-2007 03:27 AM

Heres the thing, those dont look like cliffs, they look like rocks sticking up out of the ground.small rocks at that. Then you put water over those small rocks and it just does not look right.

DustyPorViva 03-13-2007 04:07 AM

I don't get it. In your first post you say the cliffs look nice and simple, now you're saying they don't look like cliffs? They haven't changed since I posted them before, so I don't exactly understand.

Sage_Shadowbane 03-13-2007 05:04 AM

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The cliffs are Pretty nice... The only things I cant point out is that they lack detail, but since that is the style you're going for, the only other thing I can point out is that the cliffs themself look like rocks just pertruding from the ground, they dont have the depth of being cliffs. When I say they dont have the depth of being cliffs, I mean that it doesnt look as if they have a top to them (looks like grass with a layer of rocks going across it). It should look more like the grass above the cliffs is actually above it instead of behind it. But other than that... Keep it up man.

Edit: Did a quick edit of the upper cliffs just to give you an idea of what i meant.

killerogue 03-13-2007 05:10 AM

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Originally Posted by Sage_Shadowbane (Post 1288045)
The cliffs are Pretty nice... The only things I cant point out is that they lack detail, but since that is the style you're going for, the only other thing I can point out is that the cliffs themself look like rocks just pertruding from the ground, they dont have the depth of being cliffs. When I say they dont have the depth of being cliffs, I mean that it doesnt look as if they have a top to them (looks like grass with a layer of rocks going across it). It should look more like the grass above the cliffs is actually above it instead of behind it. But other than that... Keep it up man.

Yeah, I'd say make it look like grass is creeping over the tops onto the front a little bit. :D

DustyPorViva 03-13-2007 05:21 AM

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Actually, I was just doing this edit while you were posting that.

Sage_Shadowbane 03-13-2007 05:38 AM

Much better :)

Curt1zzle 03-13-2007 06:01 AM

Problem is (was) you're looking down on the bottom cliffs, and up on the top cliffs.

Sort of like this:

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The perspective like...takes a dip, or something?


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