Its bugging me..
 

It's nothing amazing yet, well i hope it is when its finished. But im posting because the image is generally bugging me, the perspective of the pillars dont appear right to me.

It may be because ive been working on them and they look this way to me, what do you think?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...dev/tiles1.png
Just base colours.


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The pillar width varies too much. Just stick with one size.

Ok i just did what you said and it doesnt look as nice :(

Where's the keystone? ):

I don't believe it's an arch, love.

It's abstract! ):

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...ev/tiles12.png

Just thought id post the small progress i made before i go sleep :D

I'm getting kind of tired of your overuse of the pure white/highlight line on things... It's a nice effect now and then but why would a dirty gray stone have shimmering pure white at it's edge? I think you could expand a lot more as an artist if you didn't always use that same style.

Just an opinion though, I don't care to hear a million opinions about my opinion.. he posted his work here to be critiqued and I'm critiquing it.

looks good tom :) , I love the sidewalk

Make the pillars after greek architecture and star big to small.

lol Ever since i came across the technique i could'nt stop using it, but you did make a really good point about a dirty path shining lol. Will edit that right away, thanks ^_^

Thanks for the awesome comment dude :D

I was originally going to do the whole greek apperance but im using a referance of memory from a certain building in Ghost Recon.

Your sidewalk is quite nice, although I would bring the contrast down so that the pattern (assuming it's used as tiles, which you seem to present it as in the example) is less repetative.

I think it looks fine.

I only have paint, and i take the colours out of real life images, its what i do for most of my stuff.

Is there a way to bring down the contrast in a certain program?



+ Thanks @ Smirt :)

sidewalk looks amazing

If you have Photoshop 7+ I can tell you how to. However, if you don't - just manually set the color difference lower.

Tom you're a ****ing master. o_O

looks great so far and i love the way you take in opinions and improve your work.

btw konidias has a point xD

It looks great man, try adding a graal perspective roof to it, that will fix the perspective of the pillars.

Yes :D I have much admiration and respect for you as an artist.

Looks very nice, I like they way it looks a bit worn, grundgy or old.

....Funny cause he didnt rlly even do anything yet people. He wanted to know what was wrong with it because it did not look right to him.

Agreed

he added some dull coloring on the "updates" (scroll down). :|

Thanks for the comments and crits, they have been really useful.

Ill post the update as soon as ive got the images all tidy, its just one huge white canvas with images all over the place :P