Sprite for use
 

Heres is a sprite im currently going to submit for a game, and if you would like to help edit or make one out of this that would be sweet!

http://img135.imageshack.us/img135/4228/girl1new2wi.png

I started making her yesterday and finished coloring with Graphics Gale, tell me what you think, and maybe make one yourself!

I need paint back. :[

no need for paint search Graphics Gale on google, download the free version and BAM it works alot better, has a grid and allows to animate!

It looks weird to me, the bottom parts are fine but the head looks too small and the chest and breasts look odd.

He's not on his own computer, I think.

oh ok, didnt know that =P

do you want to edit it? because I came here for feedback and help. :\

Nah lol im not a pixel monkey, I'm just here to complain about the work that decent people make. :)

LOL I get you=P well

Okay I got bored. XD

I moved the head down a bit (Didn't resize it) because I felt the neck was too long/head was too high up.

Then I took that girdle on the mid-section and extended it to the lower portion of the breasts.
Then I recoloured the sword and did a few pixel mods on the sword to make it look better with my colors.

I dunno if it's better or not, I just thought i'd give it a shot.

looks better

sword is way better, I changed the original sword too. but didnt post it.

I'll edit the crap out of it and make it look neat, but I can't right now.

Oh, and the breasts look wierd because you did the whole "Y" thing with the clevage. Also, she is missing a right shoulder, which could make a difference. XD

it was a quick sprite.

ahem...well, I decided to save this...for lack of a better word, mostrocity. No offence, but its just a very poor attempt at a sprite.

good edit!
its just somethings weird about those boobs, maybe its me=P

Oh, look! Deconstructive criticism followed by a craptastic revision.

oh well let him have it his way

No.

It's that kind of behaviour that discrouages artists from working harder in the future to make improvements.

You need an attitude adjustment, and a lesson in humility. You should apologize :\
Generally speaking, I disagree. Although it is a stigmata for this forum, which is not needed and will not be tolerated.

Well, perhaps it wasn't to the level of "You'll always suck, quit drawing" but was still pretty damn bad.

Alright, alright ZH I'll rephrase. I agree with you Drae. I personally think that Epone's sprite was nice (and the sword was kind of neat with the red). Perhaps a better improvement would suit such harsh words?

This is the first "phrase" you've made in this thread. What are you talking about? :confused:

its okay alright, even tho I spent along time and stuff, I will work harder everytime after.

thanks for help and back up,

E5

You deleted my post before, I'm assuming because it was spam-like. Which it was. But what I meant by it was that I was supporting Draenin's feelings. So I rephrased that sans spam.

Ah, my bad. :) I forgot to check that.
It was because you were agreeing to the part which I had pruned from Draenin's post. And also because it quoted the pruned material.

Wh...what? You "pruned" my post? What the crap? What for?

I think he found the comment about the revolving thumb trick to be a bit hot for discussion outside of 'The Lounge'.

sorry for not clarifying. Had you heard me said it myself rather than read the text, you wouldn't take it so harshly. At the time I didn't have time to say much in how to improve it. I spent about all of 5 or 6 minutes with that revision, so it wouldn't be much. Maybe soon I'll make actual constructive critism, but this wouldn't be the first time I've posted on this forum, and those who have seen my posts shouldn't think of me as one to make unthoughtful remarks. Let alone just insults on others work. I'm sorry if I've offended anyone.

Hahahah! Oh, that one. Yeah. I know why now.

Very funny that Zero decided to 'prune' that comment, though. It's certainly what one would need to drink the juice of to be regular after doing such a thing.

Oh look, hahaha, it's almost like you're saying what I deleted without actually saying it. Hahaha. Hahaha.

Hahaha.

No, seriously - stop.
:)

my edit..
 

http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2291/bild1219my.png

i editet the boots and removed outlines....

Seems too dark. A suggestion I like to make in these cases is to take it into photoshop or some other image manipulation program and desaturate it. Idealy you would have a full range of grays in your work.

yea i know but i have not changed the colors :P it is poorly shaded too....look at the boots shading that is really cheap

i dont like it ^^

:spam:


It was an outlined sprite from an anime picture I found on Deviant Art. I know it sucks but get over it.

Unless you don't post a reason, no one cares ^^

Fixed some outline 'flaws' and adjusted a little shading and turned up the hue and such.

What's up with sprites and giant boobies these days. I feel sorry for the 13 year olds playing the mmorpg that starts with L and ends up 2 who's parents come around seeing them play.

Someone, open her eye :o

LMAO yea I remember those days. you know like half the people playing Graal are Kids?