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Codein 11-26-2005 01:11 AM

The CND-Oppressor
 
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I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique :)

Wind_Master 11-26-2005 03:14 AM

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Originally Posted by Codein
I'm rather new to making futuristic/sci-fi graphics. Give me your comments and critique :)

I think its really good. It really fits the "Futuristic" description. I give it a 8/10.

BrAwLeR 11-26-2005 03:54 AM

Looks like Sayian has a little compatition, 8/10.

Akoalin 11-26-2005 04:49 AM

It looks great, it reminds me of Zero Wing for some reason. If I were you I'de add a little more shading, it'll look fine without it though.

haunter 11-26-2005 04:49 AM

The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those. :)

SayianOozaru 11-26-2005 04:58 AM

looks weird, but i like it ^^

bahamutstevetff 11-26-2005 07:13 AM

looks dodgy, but sweet, sayain, eat yer heart out.

Codein 11-26-2005 11:27 AM

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The trigger is far too big, and the up/down sprites are a bit confusing (to begin with, which is which?) The shading on the left/right sprites is pretty kickin'. I really like the bullets/plasma bolts too, very nice.

Just try to improve on the up/down sprites. Once I figure out which is which I might be able to give more constructive comments on those.
It was a new idea for the trigger. Instead of using your finger, you use your whole hand. It's meant to be a powerful gun, and since I'm guessing you'd need to charge it up, it'd be best using all your hand's strength.

Aye, I agree, the up and dwon sprites are a bit crap. I'll try and improve them.

Thanks for all your comments :)

Codein 11-26-2005 11:42 AM

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I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much :(

bahamutstevetff 11-26-2005 01:24 PM

looks better, absolutely great, sayain u got your wrok cut out go ya.

Codein 11-26-2005 02:09 PM

Thanks :)

Wind_Master 11-26-2005 04:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Codein
I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much :(

Looks great. Good work.

MrsMastermind 11-26-2005 04:53 PM

Wow, it looks great, keep it up! 8/10

Codein 11-26-2005 05:38 PM

Thankyou :D

Bl0nkt 11-26-2005 05:44 PM

How do you hold it? I'll gani it.

Codein 11-26-2005 05:51 PM

Sorta like a rifle, AK-47/Shotguns style.

Bl0nkt 11-26-2005 06:41 PM

I don't understand how you hold it. :{

Codein 11-26-2005 07:00 PM

With one hand underneath the little holder thing towards to the end of the gun (just underneth the neck) and the other hand on the hand :O

haunter 11-26-2005 09:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Codein
I tried to improve it, but I couldn't do much :(

Hrm, the up/down sprites still look wonky.

I suggest taking your work to the Graphics Design section of the forums and have the artists there help you out a bit more before you try and get this uploaded onto Zone. :)

Codein 11-26-2005 10:04 PM

I will do, thanks.

RykuZ 12-02-2005 04:33 AM

Whats that weird thing that sticks out at the top? Is it some thing to hold ammo?

anubis_wing 12-03-2005 01:48 AM

Bah. I don't like it it's not.......interesting.

Wind_Master 12-03-2005 02:13 AM

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Originally Posted by anubis_wing
Bah. I don't like it it's not.......interesting.

It seems preety cool.

Admins 12-05-2005 07:54 PM

Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?

Huwajux 12-05-2005 07:59 PM

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Originally Posted by Stefan
Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?

I would say plasma rifle. Shotgun isn't exactly "Sci-Fi". :)

bahamutstevetff 12-05-2005 08:51 PM

Ya, true.

Wind_Master 12-05-2005 10:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Stefan
Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?

I agree with darky, it should be plasma shot.

Zulu15 12-13-2005 02:36 AM

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Originally Posted by Bl0nkt
How do you hold it? I'll gani it.

I think you place one hand on the trigger and another one on the top thing that looks kinda like an amo clip, thats how I'd hold it anyways XD

darkkid 12-13-2005 06:44 AM

Looks kool and i agree it should be a plasmarifle :asleep:

Zulu15 12-15-2005 07:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Stefan
Looks good, charging should be like plasma rifle or shotgun ?

He means wether the charged shot should me just one(like the plasmariffle) or a spread shot (like a shotgun).

Huwajux 12-15-2005 08:03 PM

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Originally Posted by Zulu15
He means wether the charged shot should me just one(like the plasmariffle) or a spread shot (like a shotgun).

How can you see that rifle making a spread shot?

RykuZ 12-16-2005 06:23 AM

How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?

It looks like a trumpet... The Gravitron...

Maybe the CND-Opressor could be some power shot kinda thing.

icemaster 12-16-2005 03:11 PM

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Originally Posted by RykuZ
How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?

It looks like a trumpet... The Gravitron...


my baby ^^

SirRiley1 12-16-2005 03:16 PM

Like I have said before in another post somewhere. It doesnt fire accurate. So it's like a shotgun but, plasma. Also it doesn't hurt much. If you can use it right, it is a deadly weapon. *looks at Touya*

icemaster 12-21-2005 03:30 PM

lol i just remembered wat anubis posted

all i can say...is lol

Wind_Master 12-21-2005 10:41 PM

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Originally Posted by RykuZ
How can a Gravitron fire a freaking spread shot that huge?

They do little damage so it's all good.

anubis_wing 12-22-2005 01:49 AM

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Originally Posted by icemaster
lol i just remembered wat anubis posted

all i can say...is lol

What did I say. Bad memory sorry : /

MisterMastermind 12-22-2005 02:19 AM

Ok i just looked at the thing but the top/bottom sprites look like different guns.... 8.5/10

icemaster 12-22-2005 02:36 PM

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Originally Posted by anubis_wing
What did I say. Bad memory sorry : /


id say it but it would only get deleted so ill say it this way

it involved a good looking female


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