Jetpack
 

Well I made what do you think?

Looks like Batman, if he had one!
But yeah, thats cool.

i like it

9/10?!?!

make the wings shorter on both sides but its a 7/10 i think.. pretty good shading.

Big for a graal character, but 9/10.

Looks more like a space shuttle, but anyway
7.5/10

Neat, nice work.

His bodies are alot larger then the graal default ones.

looks good donald. It would be kinda big for graal character though.

It seems someone has been doing their home work :D.

It's seems a little off on perpective.
You shouldn't be able to see inside the cones at the bottom.

Thats because the rocket part where the fire it coming out is pointed to back and not stright down its curved. If it was pointing stright down it would bern your ass lol. There is also wings for stearing and a fuel circlulating matrix which recycles the fuel so you dont have to put more in for a while. This makes it so you can jump for 20 min and then it rechages while your not using it and floating un the air. In the rocketeer they had all this accept no wings. So they had to use that hat to stear mine has wings so you dont need the hat.

So why can I see under the wings as well? I'm sure they don't burn my ass by pointing down.

Because they also are tilted at an angel to allow you to stear with your head pointing up.

Erhm.. what time age is your world set for? o.O

If I were to look at that from a side view I would see this:

yeah dont want to get your ass berned.

Well I guess your right, we can deal with it being shoved into our neck.

Why do you post your work Don if you won't heed anyone's advice?

What the ***, no censore?

looks good :D

heres my jetpack x_X..

the ganis is set up where you stick your arms in the sides of the jet pack (those black holes)


Edit: I saw that Jetpack after lookin it up on google.. O.o