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Here (I'm a horrible lvl maker but I can learn for people who think it sucks the big one, I already know it does).

Here is the 2nd part.

ew....

This is what I made based off of the description, with a "water fix" by mmmkay.

Hmm here is the whole level x.x

2nd part.

Hmm...
Here is my final result :)

If you are to lazy to download level, here is the screenshot :D

Haha, DragonX, don't give up your day job. :p

I won't :(
I am just learning though..
Eventually I will be an average level maker!

that look all the same also made a finish vesion that u post but not 10 unfinished lvls...

Well... that is a nice start. You have somewhat attempts at the detail etc. Here are some suggestions though:

- Rivers must allwats flow in freaky non straight paterns! For now Just try to make it go in zig zags. (Same rule goes for roads etc)
- Some people don't agree with this, but I belive level should be FULL! By That I mean there should be Trees, Bushes wholes, grass, flowers, stones, stones2 and whatever the hell else you can think of, all over the level.

Fot now that's all you need to know, and now try to correct your level, then people will post more suggestions.

To others who laughed, he IS learning, instead of laughing help the guy out, when you started, you probably were way worse! I know I was... I just put 4 predefined houses, made a predefined path and though I was leet lvl maker.. Oh wait, at the time, it WAS being a l33t lvl maker X.x.

I remember years ago when i made my first levels.... everything i made was symetrical. It would piss me off if it wasn't, but it made natural levels look bad.

Once I overcame that my levels started becomming nice ^-^

Good Job DragonX... keep practicing :).

ok i am going to show you what i submited to the RPing Develp, i am ashamed i will go back and redo the walls and the lake, i was half asleep and i feel dumba nd i still have not gone to sleep, well see what i sent in then welp me with some suggjestions maybe, i am already atempting to fix the wall then try and re-send it in :D

ok i am going to show you what i submited to the RPing Develp, i am ashamed i will go back and redo the walls and the lake, i was half asleep and i feel dumba nd i still have not gone to sleep, well see what i sent in then welp me with some suggjestions maybe, i am already atempting to fix the wall then try and re-send it in :D

arrg the atachments are to big =/
if you guys care my AIM is Geno3344 :D

Dragon, it would look better if you put the edges to the grass|water. [located under the house tiles in the tile selection]

[I did not bother adding detail, just showing him. :p]

I like it! :D

Here, does this look any better? :)

Grr it didn't post, here.

Not too shabby.... just don't make everything so symmetrical:p.

See attachment. [for some errors]

Those levels (first 2) was on Dino Valley

OK!
How does this look? :D

HA!

Hmm....
I can't tile water :(

getting a little better but I dont like the shamrock things (dont know what else to call em :X) on the left, usually they just appear every so often in levels, i never seen them bunched like that

Thanks.
Does this look any better?

this is what i submeted i don't think i will pass but if i do my levels will be better then this

Can you read? I said he could do that if he wanted, but it could look better if he used the real light|dark water tiles. I wasn't 'putting him down,' I was making a suggestion. Idiot.