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smirt362 04-14-2011 12:57 PM

Arca Images
 
Figured I'd start my own graphic thread filled with Arca stuff and save the other thread for various updates on my progress.

Anyway, on with the images (and hopefully some critiques, I need them) first up a tower roof. Should I maybe rotate it to where just one of the sides is facing the player or do you like it as is? Either way the little window is going to stay.

http://img41.imageshack.us/img41/7091/rooftest.png

HerrChris 04-14-2011 03:52 PM

I really like that kind of angle and especially those pixel art-based details like the bricks and the roofing tiles.

But i think the color blend might be too harsh, reminds me of those pixel art games in the 90s. I would also add some dark outline.

haro41 04-15-2011 04:49 AM

id never thought id say this in the graal gfx forum, but you might have a bit too much contrast on the roof. also a better definition of a light source would be good too. looks good!

Astram 04-16-2011 01:21 AM

Gotta love diagnol tiles ;)
Good work.

smirt362 04-26-2011 06:04 AM

Remade the wall tiles because crono pointed out that the old ones looked like they were made for smaller characters and made me cry.

http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/9193/walltest5.png

Turned out better ja? Except for perhaps the saturation of the color...what do y'all think?

YoungTwist 04-26-2011 06:31 AM

Smirt, Do you plan on using this type of tileset on graal? *your server*? Also that house?

smirt362 04-26-2011 06:46 AM

Yeah, also I'm scrapping that first image and redoing it. Too tiny. Why do you ask?

imbavik 04-26-2011 01:09 PM

nice work! :)

Clockwork 04-26-2011 05:17 PM

Looks nice :o Add some color variation to the bricks tho :(

smirt362 04-26-2011 07:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clockwork (Post 1645707)
Looks nice :o Add some color variation to the bricks tho :(

Like make some darker/lighter?

Crono 04-26-2011 07:21 PM

i was referring to the castle one XD

Bell 04-26-2011 09:25 PM

Although I like the idea of having the roof spire at an angle, I've never seen anyone build a window into a corner like that. It doesn't really meet up correctly doing it that way. Your pixeling is really nice though and it looks like I should go pick some flowers for my table :p

smirt362 04-26-2011 10:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bell (Post 1645729)
Although I like the idea of having the roof spire at an angle, I've never seen anyone build a window into a corner like that. It doesn't really meet up correctly doing it that way. Your pixeling is really nice though and it looks like I should go pick some flowers for my table :p

I'm redoing it

smirt362 04-29-2011 08:06 AM

I'm REALLY slow aren't I?
http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/900/windowtest.png

Anyway, been a bit busy. Hopefully tomorrow I'll have some interesting stuff to look at

Also, what do you think of this lattice work? Should I work on it some more?
http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/3758/latticetest.png

alarid0 04-29-2011 10:20 AM

Something isn't gelling with me on that lattice work. I think it's that it doesn't have any apparent order; there isn't any pattern I can follow.

As far as the wall goes, I like how you've pulled some bricks out and pushed others in. I don't know if adding variation to the color is the right way to go, though... you've achieved a good level of variation without making it easy to pick out where the pattern repeats itself. Adding variation in color from brick to brick might make it more difficult to retain that. It would look amazing if you could pull it off, but it's much more likely that adding that would make the repetition stand out.

Clockwork 04-29-2011 09:29 PM

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/103...tlwalls429.png

Variations :o

smirt362 05-05-2011 06:21 AM

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/3294/latticework.png

Working some more on it...what should I do with the color of the lattice? Or do you think that looks good?

Edit: Added some highlights to the lattice

Also, Clockwork, s'alright if I use your colors? I like em ;3

WhiteDragon 05-05-2011 06:24 AM

Looks better.

Maybe make it grey? All the yellow/brown is starting to get overwhelming imo.

smirt362 05-05-2011 07:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WhiteDragon (Post 1647682)
Looks better.

Maybe make it grey? All the yellow/brown is starting to get overwhelming imo.

Yeah, hmm.

Clockwork 05-05-2011 08:37 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by smirt362 (Post 1647681)
Also, Clockwork, s'alright if I use your colors? I like em ;3

I don't mind, but I'm just saying, you used more brown for the window D: everythingll be brown :(

smirt362 05-05-2011 08:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clockwork (Post 1647687)
I don't mind, but I'm just saying, you used more brown for the window D: everythingll be brown :(

I guess I could change it, but I don't really want it to be just "gray." Maybe a green or a blue?

smirt362 05-06-2011 11:57 AM

http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/5...01144253am.png

It's getting there

xAndrewx 05-06-2011 06:03 PM

looks kinda good, maybe make the diagonal angles a bit more forward?

DeCeaseD 05-06-2011 10:20 PM

Looks pretty darn good, my only complaints are that 1.) the bottom-most bricks which pertrude outwards, don't really seem like they are pertruding outwards in the diagonal views, and 2.) the diagonal bricks on the top half don't seem to really match with the front view of the bricks, as in the front, the bricks seem to pop inwards and outwards randomly, where as the diagonal ones all look in alignment.

salesman 05-06-2011 10:36 PM

Looks really good, but the diagonal walls don't seem to fit properly with the normal view. I don't know how to explain it, but they just don't seem to match up smoothly...

Arch_Angel 05-07-2011 01:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DeCeaseD (Post 1648010)
1.) the bottom-most bricks which pertrude outwards, don't really seem like they are pertruding outwards in the diagonal views

My only problem. Other than that good work. Could also work on diag's as Sage mentioned. They are hard to do though.

Keep the nice work coming!

DeCeaseD 05-07-2011 04:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1648015)
Looks really good, but the diagonal walls don't seem to fit properly with the normal view. I don't know how to explain it, but they just don't seem to match up smoothly...

I just explained it, susan.. ! !pissed!

salesman 05-07-2011 06:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DeCeaseD (Post 1648095)
I just explained it, susan.. ! !pissed!

I'm talking more about the edges/corners which don't seem to transition properly. If this was a screenshot of a level put together in the level editor, I'd think there was a tile error.

DeCeaseD 05-07-2011 11:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1648105)
I'm talking more about the edges/corners which don't seem to transition properly. If this was a screenshot of a level put together in the level editor, I'd think there was a tile error.

Ahh okay, I see what you mean now. XP

smirt362 05-08-2011 04:39 AM

http://img835.imageshack.us/img835/3236/wallssofar.png

Better? Also, haven't decided the color of the lattice yet and the slit windows are a tiny bit wider now

The_Federov 05-08-2011 08:41 PM

I like the Lattice, as is, good work.

salesman 05-08-2011 09:28 PM

can't wait to see a level put together with these

The_Federov 05-08-2011 10:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1648472)
can't wait to see a level put together with these

Yeah, it should look good.

smirt362 05-09-2011 08:46 AM

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/3236/wallssofar.png

More stuff.

On the left is some trim that attaches to the wall portion like this:
http://img812.imageshack.us/img812/1658/walltrim.png


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