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Venom_Fish 02-20-2010 11:51 PM

Era's Song: Make 'Em Say (Era Remix)
 
I have finally completed the track for Era to combat UN's early dominance of the Graalian Musical Stage. Listen through this link:



soundclick.com/wilunleashed

Make 'Em Say (Eramix)
This is how we do, Era!

Here are the lyrics:

Hey Squirt what up? What up Squirt?
Everything I'm on it, they think ima go left?
I go right, and then I go left.
They think ima go left, I go right and then I go left.
Ya mean? fake moves then pull dat trigga
Graal: Era affiliated! Free Godzilla!
Don't ban Wil, free the all PlayerKillers!
Matter of fact, free THE WHOLE ERA, PLAYA
Cloyd bout to come on too, man.
We holdin' it down, bull Willy man
Give these newbies a single or something, stop playin' with em.
We Make 'Em Say
Hey Squirt, you gon' want me to do dis again
GOT EMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!

Showtime
We Make 'Em Say

I like my eyes bright red and my hair dark blue
Keepin 10 clips like 5 x 2
I be killin these newbies when I slide by through
Like a drive by do with my Black Holst crew
Flyin' the guns sound like some lions
We Keep a white girl like kittygirl97
Hey, I ain't braggin' I'm sayin
Alot of these scrubs be fraudin'; lyin
Really though they fishin for a prodigy
I got players tryna hit me like a lottery
Chris Vimes wants to ban me cause I'm a hot comadity
Puffin on some cigs to ease the pain like an apology
Players they can kill but they will never be as hot as me.
Winter Era like the same arena were da flyers be: ICEY!
I know I don't think they like me.
Maybe I cause I might be killin' all they buddies.
It's easy to hate me it's harder to love me.
You a hater ask ya buddies bet they all used to love me.
Used to be callin' me buddy
And they be callin' for nothin'
Cause when I tell them newbs I like em I be kiddin' like Cuddi


They be like... (Ugh)
Yup yup We Make Em' say...(Ugh) Yup Yup We Make Em Say... (Ugh)
Yup Yup We Got Em' like... (Ugh) Era stand up!!
You got a sword1?
No, we don't care!
Now were the uzi at?!
Tt's over here!
We spray hard!
Bullets in the air!
Playercount on here!
Make you wanna stop and stare!!!!

Before I met Squirt, my hat was King; Martin Luther.
Diamonds in the mines, Lookin husky; Resputia.
Don't get it twisted, swordspar but I'm a shooter.
Glock 18 clip, hangin' longer then a ruler.
Every time I see them newbs, they be like; you the.
Best like FJ, but I tell them; I'm cooler.
I ain't even aim, I hit his brain like a tutor.
I play events all, early in the morning like a rooster.
I'm a Graal E.R.A. BOY
Lookin' at my pixels everytime I flow by.
Players hatin' on me.
I don't know why, cause I come from Era Sewers, where the sun don't shine.
EC died young, so I had to man up.
Cases got court, so I had to stand up.
I'm the best around, hands down hands up.
Smack Streety right in front of his squad and what like... (Ugh)


Yup yup We Make Em' say...(Ugh) Yup Yup We Make Em Say... (Ugh)
Yup Yup We Got Em' like... (Ugh) Era stand up!!
You got a sword1?
No, we don't care!
Now were the uzi at?!
Tt's over here!
We spray hard!
Bullets in the air!
Playercount on here!
Make you wanna stop and stare!!!!

Their server, damn near forty.
They ain't messin' with shorty.
We shine like a grand worth of jewelry.
For sure we, The hottest on Graal now.
All guts glory, years tho.
6 all on its back; rob horry.
Limbo, Log on Era, all eyes on me.
Like its, Tupac.
Haters, envy want shakur thee.
Haters, why get mad? We get players.
Intimidator mask, lookin like dark vader.
Diamonds in my chain, like the water up in Era.
All blue, them newbies like who the heck are you.
Soul Family, we ball through.
Something we all do,
On dat you kill kill me, they prolly will kill you.
Chris Vimes made the Tommy Gun faster than a Matti.
In the spar room million bullet sprayin like a shotty.
Man this server got be, haters like how he?
Do that, who dat, we dat. Prolli

They be like... (Ugh)
Yup yup We Make Em' say...(Ugh) Yup Yup We Make Em Say... (Ugh)
Yup Yup We Got Em' like... (Ugh) Era stand up!!
You got a sword1?
No, we don't care!
Now were the uzi at?!
Tt's over here!
We spray hard!
Bullets in the air!
Playercount on here!
Make you wanna stop and stare!!!!

papajchris 02-20-2010 11:55 PM

Link redirects you to the site's main page.

Venom_Fish 02-21-2010 12:09 AM

Fixed, edited.

Crono 02-21-2010 12:11 AM

era do it wrong

Demisis_P2P 02-21-2010 12:14 AM

do it without autotune. it makes you sound like maverick and i can't understand a damn thing.

Venom_Fish 02-21-2010 12:17 AM

Squirt and Chris requested autotune use. Normally I can't stand it, so unoriginal.

Vman13x 02-21-2010 01:03 AM

Hmm it's was okay..... I don't see why you'd make a remix about era though.

papajchris 02-21-2010 01:14 AM

The little kid sounding voice parts seemed kind of random and annoyed me to death. That is why i also HATE the song "how low can you go."

Dark_Zeratul101 02-21-2010 03:57 AM

Did they force you to make a song on a condition to unban you.

Elizabeth 02-21-2010 04:51 AM

***

cbk1994 02-21-2010 05:11 AM

wtf, I said auto-tune, not chipmunks

CharlieM 02-21-2010 05:13 AM

lol, intro is messed up lemme see what I can do, is that fireman in the background?

Your autotune is bad, did you do it or did you have kris talk

lil wil rappin, something he can do

Dark_Zeratul101 02-21-2010 05:19 AM

How about we don't use auto-tune, only fegorts use it.

CharlieM 02-21-2010 05:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dark_Zeratul101 (Post 1557570)
How about we don't use auto-tune, only fegorts use it.

atleast not chipmunks, maybe a slight bit of auto tune or someone who sounds like gucci, get Mauriano to help out

LordSquirt 02-21-2010 07:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557519)
Squirt and Chris requested autotune use. Normally I can't stand it, so unoriginal.

I never said auto-tune..?

It does sound like chipmunks though, but I think your lyrics are pretty good

CharlieM 02-21-2010 07:01 AM

slow it down some

DarknessShadow 02-21-2010 04:52 PM

Your run this town was better imo.

Andre2006 02-21-2010 06:17 PM

Everything is bad.

Venom_Fish 02-21-2010 08:53 PM

I hate auto-tune, its unoriginal. Only scrub-rappers use it, Chris Vimes requested it.
I can re-do it without autotune or those homosexual effects.

LordSquirt 02-21-2010 08:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557681)
I hate auto-tune, its unoriginal. Only scrub-rappers use it, Chris Vimes requested it.
I can re-do it without autotune or those homosexual effects.

I would most likely like that better

MontyPython 02-21-2010 09:41 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557681)
I hate auto-tune, its unoriginal. Only scrub-rappers use it, Chris Vimes requested it.
I can re-do it without autotune or those homosexual effects.

So it's unoriginal. Only scrub rappers use it. And your best excuse for using it is simply that Chris Vimes requested it?

And you called him a doormat?

To be fair, though, even taking auto-tune off wouldn't save it. That's just one out of a myriad of reasons as to why this is so terrible.

Look up Swifty G, I'm sure he'd be happy to give you a few pointers.

CharlieM 02-21-2010 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MontyPython (Post 1557688)
So it's unoriginal. Only scrub rappers use it. And your best excuse for using it is simply that Chris Vimes requested it?

And you called him a doormat?

To be fair, though, even taking auto-tune off wouldn't save it. That's just one out of a myriad of reasons as to why this is so terrible.

Look up Swifty G, I'm sure he'd be happy to give you a few pointers.

The rap is a good freestyle I doubt you'd know anything about that though, your computer is too far away from clubs and parties. Wil freestyles which makes me think that it started as a freestyle and he decided to make it a whole song

Venom_Fish 02-21-2010 11:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MontyPython (Post 1557688)
So it's unoriginal. Only scrub rappers use it. And your best excuse for using it is simply that Chris Vimes requested it?

And you called him a doormat?

To be fair, though, even taking auto-tune off wouldn't save it. That's just one out of a myriad of reasons as to why this is so terrible.

Look up Swifty G, I'm sure he'd be happy to give you a few pointers.

Haha. If he requested I make an Era Song to combat's UN's and I obliged to that request, why wouldn't I go as far as intaking his preferences? You're such a dimwit, your petty attempts at a solid insult are pathetic.

I'd prefer you explain those myriad of reasons. Assuming you haven't listened to any music outside of the footsteps above your basement. Little turd.

salesman 02-21-2010 11:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557681)
I hate auto-tune, its unoriginal. Only scrub-rappers use it, Chris Vimes requested it.
I can re-do it without autotune or those homosexual effects.

I didn't know Chris has so much influence over you...

p.s. you called yourself a scrub rapper =(

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557708)
Haha. If he requested I make an Era Song to combat's UN's and I obliged to that request, why wouldn't I go as far as intaking his preferences? You're such a dimwit, your petty attempts at a solid insult are pathetic.

I'd prefer you explain those myriad of reasons. Assuming you haven't listened to any music outside of the footsteps above your basement. Little turd.

So when Monty argues on the computer he lives in his mom's basement, but when you do it, you're still a straight thug hardcore rapper badass.

Before you call someone out on their life, take a look at yours:
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CharlieM 02-22-2010 12:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1557713)
I didn't know Chris has so much influence over you...

p.s. you called yourself a scrub rapper =(



So when Monty argues on the computer he lives in his mom's basement, but when you do it, you're still a straight thug hardcore rapper badass.

Before you call someone out on their life, take a look at yours:
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you have to look at how many hours vs how many years the account has been owned, and compare it to the other person.

Dnegel 02-22-2010 01:10 AM

I laughed at the lyrics, but the choorus was odd. xD

NightmareNight 02-22-2010 01:29 AM

honestly, good ****

Venom_Fish 02-22-2010 04:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1557713)
I didn't know Chris has so much influence over you...

p.s. you called yourself a scrub rapper =(



So when Monty argues on the computer he lives in his mom's basement, but when you do it, you're still a straight thug hardcore rapper badass.

Before you call someone out on their life, take a look at yours:
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I wouldn't consider a Graal-Related song "real" rapper hence why I even considered it. I can see that me smacking you with my genitals in the face a few years back has left them engraved in your cheek.

Racked those up since Era started, you probably have close to that with all your accounts, and you've been playing less than half that time. Interesting.

MontyPython 02-22-2010 07:01 AM

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Originally Posted by salesman (Post 1557713)
Before you call someone out on their life, take a look at yours:
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**** hours. Once you start releasing ****ty rap songs ABOUT Graal, how many hours you spent on it are the least of your concerns. At least there's a minute chance you may have been idling for some of those hours doing something productive.

As for Wil, you're asking me to elaborate on the reasons? Look man, I could pretty much just point at the entire ****ing song and say that's reason enough for you to stop releasing **** like this. I mean, I really can't think of anything that's -good- about it.

Your flow leaves much to be desired. Really lacks emotion most of the time.
The beat/song has no authority. It's ****ty. It's generic. I'm going to go out on a limb here and guess you didn't actually even make the song, so why couldn't you have picked one that doesn't suck? It's like the equivalent of elevator music in the hip hop genre. It's got all the elements, but it doesn't -do- anything with them.

To be fair, not all of your lyrics were bad. They weren't great, they were just delightfully mediocre. But randomly you throw out **** like "It's easy to hate me it's harder to love me.
You a hater ask ya buddies bet they all used to love me."

Whoa. love me...and love me? Oh my god. That **** rhymes. Clever.

The chorus, holy ****. Terrible execution. Climaxing squirrels in an orgy? Seriously, in what mental state could anyone have thought that sounded even remotely good? It's bad enough you used auto-tune, but you don't even know how to ****ing use it well.

I'd love to sit here all day in my basement and nit-pick at your sub-par (I'm being kind) rapping talent here, but I think my mom just made some popcorn and bought me some new clothes. It's time for me to make my weekly excursion.

Farewell, gentlemen.

sizzle1989 02-22-2010 07:43 AM

Honestly, after reading this... Are we seriously comparing two average Joe's rapping about Graal to mainstream music? It's obvious this was for fun. This has never been American Idol it's Graal. I don't understand why there's gotta be so much fuss over this. If you haven't posted music, and/or you know you can't do any better then you have no right to criticize others.

I'm taking no sides here, nor am I bashing anyone. Just saying, drop it.

MysticX2X 02-22-2010 09:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Venom_Fish (Post 1557708)
Haha. If he requested I make an Era Song to combat's UN's and I obliged to that request, why wouldn't I go as far as intaking his preferences?

Yeah, but you gotta take a step back and see if it really does sound bad.

cbk1994 02-22-2010 09:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MysticX2X (Post 1557842)
Yeah, but you gotta take a step back and see if it really does sound bad.

Either way, Autotune isn't what ruined the song :p

MysticX2X 02-22-2010 09:33 AM

Yes it did. And whatever that low pitch to sound like a chipmunk.

cbk1994 02-22-2010 09:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MysticX2X (Post 1557845)
Yes it did. And whatever that low pitch to sound like a chipmunk.

Poor use of autotune ruined the song. Autotune in itself does not ruin a song.

The chipmunk thing is mostly what ruined it.

SwimChao 02-22-2010 09:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SwimChao (Post 1557847)
GRAAL AFFILIATION HAS PUT OUT AN OFFICIAL REBUTTAL TRACK TO WILL SOUL'S "ERAMIX".


I will not be posting a link to it here because it has vulgar language in it. You can view it on Graal Affiliation's official YouTube channel if you would like to go searching. (It's also a video response to Will Soul's "ERAMIX")

See here

Yo, respect to Will Soul for trying. I didn't hear any autotune in the song though.

I heard echo effects and pitch shifting (Similar to what they use in the Alvin & The Chipmunk movies).

MysticX2X 02-22-2010 09:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by cbk1994 (Post 1557846)
Poor use of autotune ruined the song. Autotune in itself does not ruin a song.

The chipmunk thing is mostly what ruined it.

That's what I meant. Sorry for the confusion. :p

SwimChao 02-22-2010 09:58 AM


Andre2006 02-22-2010 10:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CharlieM (Post 1557717)
you have to look at how many hours vs how many years the account has been owned, and compare it to the other person.

Where is Virus? he has like 700 hours yet hes been here for ages.

Imperialistic 02-22-2010 04:57 PM

No offense, you had good lyrics, but chill with the tryhard sound effects.

Streety ripped that **** up though

Rufus 02-22-2010 05:08 PM

Your intro is far too long and I think you could probably do with a better mic :(


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