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What do you think of our story line? Its a rough draft.
good, bad, horrible, j00 0wnz me...those are all good replies, lol.

http://lagoonia.dome-x.com/story.php

So everyone on the server go into a deep sleep and their wives are captured? Think about it man...it's impossible.

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you missed the point....this is the prolog....in other words...it sets up the story for the server. No one is actually sleeping, lol.
That isnt for scripting, that is for reading. Stories are great for setting the mood in a Player World.

But....what do you think about the story itself, not if it's "Possible"

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why isnt anyone ever serious here? If you dont have an opinion, dont reply.

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and you're a lame ***

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Well to me this story is messed up a bit, what if a girl is playing graal? What is she then? Is she considered a automatic lesbian when she logs onto your server? lol

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says the guy from queerbec :megaeek:

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yeah, so what? Everyone knows ***s have rights too, lmao. When you read a book, you dont get to choose which character you view the story from. When you play an RPG game...you dont get to choose who the main char for the start is (Normally). What if a girl wants to play Chrono Trigger? Does that make her a lezbo because the main char is a guy? No. You play a role. The person playing does not represent the character, as the character does not represent the player.

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NO.....plus this is an online game, not an offline rpg, thats why its messed up to have a story for an "Online game"

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and btw,(this doesnt apply to your story) one thing I hate about mostley all stories they say stuff like:

"The world was traped under a evil"

or

"Its yoru job to save the world from this darkness"

blah blah blah you get the point?

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how about you just make an option to be a man or woman from the start?

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lol, seems logic, if your a man yoru wife does the disapearing then blah blah story, if your a woman vice versa

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:rolleyes: you really suck, immature little 12 years old, worst then IcePick!

bah bah bah
 

Think about it for a second. When you log onto a server for the 1st time....what do you start as? A guy, or a girl? As far as i know....you start off as a n00by guy. I could change it...but i guess you guys arent open to ideas....Anyway...the hero isnt trying to save a wife or anything....he/she is trying to save themselves because they are trapped in a dream, lol. Either way, I feel the "idea" if the story is good. Save the minor details (Not the major ones)and no matter how you look at it, i feel its a good story.

i didnt insult it or anything, i just said that if you gave the players an option at the start it could be better. if they choose man make them the normal newbie, of woman make them the normal newbie with body8 ;)

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good idea! I think i might just do that....but...there isnt really a point because of the fact that players can change how they look anyway.