From the asylum, the prophets would convince others of their truths and incite a revolt against the wardens.

And the revolt is of course an amazing succes, resulting in a new religion ultimately being born, a religion all to do about posting philosophies about the future on forums, and spreading the cosmic wisdom encaptured therein.

Soon, aliens discover that intelligent life has finally arrived on Earth, and make their appearance at last.

OK!
stop talking
this thread is about Nothar

And when those aliens come they will be greeted by the automatic "Hello, welome to Earth. Enjoy your stay here and be sure to check out some of our travel brochures acquirable at NASA", which then turns out to be the worst possible insult in the aliens language after which they instantly declare war on Earth.

After war is declared, thousands will perish under the tyranny of the aliens, until peace is made when they realise how delicious pizza is, and how much of it humans can make.

Then economy will show an increasing rise and in the stock market people will buy stocks for the different ingredients for pizza's.

A trade route will be set up, bringing alien slave girls in exchange for our twisted crust lovelies.

But those alien slave girls only came in use as servants due to the fact that they were not in any way attractive to Earthlings.

Except for one young alien lass, who, quite endearingly, was thought of as ugly in the alien community. On Earth, she's the most beautiful thing imaginable.

(Hmm, those aliens would probably like that last groupy :p)

But this young alien lass had no interest in working "under" a master and rebelled against the slavery.

Running away, she found herself in the arms of the male prophet, who calmly told her "I have to go home now - college is closing. Seeya tomorrow," and disappeared into the sunset.

This weeks reviews
 

I know alot of people are waiting on the newest reviews, well i'll be doing them today and i'll post them here. the ones that i mark ass passed will be sent to Stefan so he can take a look at them.
Good luck to all of you who submitted playerworlds to me :)

Review Delteria and delete it. The outside of NightFall's house is on there, and the inside is one of my really old houses, and it's even labeled as my house. And I never wanted a house on that server, and I never gave them permission to use my old house inside. Also, I told them several times to remove it and they refused! A playerworld like that.....well, hell...it's not even a playerword....needs to be removed.

- Middle Earth
I think i've heard this name before, however the levels are nice, but they have to many errors (signs overlaping bushes, misplaced tiles, etc), not quite enough levels. what would the players do? All I seen to do was hockey and that's an old thing that not many people care for anymore. If they make it a bit bigger with more things to do it would pass. There was also way to many empty houses.
- Failed -

- Illusion
Levels are improperly linked. Sidewalks take up most of the level, where are you gonna put the houses and such at with sidewalks that big?
Tile errors from time to time, not really noticable, but needs to be fixed.
Levels are to plain, add some decoration to make the more attractive :)
- Faled -

- Trabia
NPC Store was a dead link.
Levels are way to plain, just grass, bushes, and normal houses
Why was the level 2 glove right near the starting level? Is that giving the players something to do?
Spin blast NPC don't work properly
Level 3 glove is just near the level 2 glove. Why make it so easy to get stuff?
A level loaded with zora head npc's named Man that do absolutly nothing.
Kill 1 cave of yellow baddies to get a heart and 200 gralat, sorry but that's not exactly what i'd call a quest.
- Failed -

- Anubis (Isn't this a sailor moon name?)
Same stuff that was submitted last time, nothing has changed :(
- Failed -

- Murasamune
Not much to it yet but it looks to be a promising pw, let's just hope the owners can do a good job and not make me regret doing this :)
- Passed -

- No name (by oni-link)
5 levels, not even worth looking at, and it wasn't even zipped
- Failed -

- No name (From D Strader)
Again this one isn't zipped and it has far to few levels to even waste the time to look at them.
- Failed -

- Babylon (isn't this a movie or something?)
Nice plot.
used original weapons (boomerang, super bow, etc.)
Levels are rather plain.
There's a book called "Weight loss for fat people" - Isn't that being rather rude?
Broken level links.
- Failed -

- Xone
Houses are to plain (inside)
Excellent quality outside levels.
Well if there was something for the players to do and the houses were fixed up some this world might just make it.
- Failed -

It's sad that only 1 passed. =/

I'd like to know what bozo put YOU, whose playerworlds have links done by two-yeat-olds and completely unoriginal ideas, levels, and NPCs in charge of judging other peoples' playerworlds.

"used original weapons (boomerang, super bow, etc.)"

They are original because they are both on classic, and have been for years.

Tybalt grow up.. we aren't all as fortunate as you, i mean really we can't all be immature now can we? And Stefan put me in charge.. just because your jealous gives you no right to complain like a 5 year old.. bye

Send the images and levels in one e-mail but different zip files such as myworld-levels.zip and myworld-gifs.zip

Thanks for the information, I'll be sure to add some more things to do. You may have heard it before, but I came up with the name (not saying someone didn't before me). I'll be sure to retile all of the errors. I may add my tennis court, it's a bit buggy right now but I'm sure I can make it work right.

What people say about my server has nothing to do with my judgement on other worlds, i go by the book and judge everything fairly.. i don't play the "he dissed me, payback time" game.

There also is a quest if you didn't see it.

I just think it's upsetting that the quality control officer for playerworlds, so to speak, owns playerworlds. Owns bad playerworlds. Putting the owner or staff of a playerworld in charge of evaluating playerworlds is the stupidest decision anyone could make.

YES! Murasamune has been excepted! I know for a fact that this server will be promising because I have seen some of the stuff and it is VERY good =)

lol isn't excepted the opposite of accepted?

:)

NPulse isn't a bad playerworld. It was better before 1.4 was released, but it's not that bad.

*DOH*

ACCEPTED

WILL YOU PEOPLE SHUT UP!!!!!!

Stefan keeps them up there, Stefan is a PROFESSIONAL!!! DO you know what that means? That means Stefan has a REAL job, Graal (obviously i dont know him, but this looks like his job) he knows what is good, and obviously if people still play graal he is doing his job!!! You people are just mad because you dont know how to script, build levels, or anything, and get mad when you see Geovannie rating servers...it gets very annoying and its time i posted how annoying it is, once you know how to program like stefan does, and once you build a game, maybe then you could decide what goes on your game...but Stefan decides things to make his game better, and doesnt put crap up...this is common sense people, otherwise graal would have 0 players and it wouldnt keep going like it does

Wow that isn't kind of sad, that is downright pathetic.

you got it neo!!! You scripted a 700 line bank system, simply because you cant script worth crap, that wasnt sarcasm...good script = working and very short, not 700 lines a very laggy...pet system would be easy to make, you probably used n00b not online working commands...all the scripts you named can be made at any scripting level, only difference is one may not work online, be 500 lines, very laggy, use n00b things like putnpc, and be very ***....just shut up youve passed from getting annoying to being annoying

you dont know who you talking to do you? ok im gonna make a pinball system in...hmm 30 minutes sound good? im gonna post it here to make you look like a fool, and im gonna let faheria have it.
have a nice day :-)

umm, I editted this post, something about us being good, but now I'm discouraged by stefan

Geovanie please say 'not good enough yet' instead
of 'failed', and 'good quality' instead of 'passed'.
An important thing of pw testing is to not
hurt people or making them too much hope
in getting the server up.
I have seen Murasamune some weeks ago,
I saw good baddies and weapons but
the overworld was ugly/chaotic, have you made
a new one? I would also need it to see if its really good.

hehe thats why I need to be PW Reviewer! J/k

heres my little review :)

N-Pulse
Uses original weapons (bow and bombs!) this is very very bad.
(Minus 10 points)
Mixes gray tiles with cliffs making levels ugly. (minus 5)
Music doesnt fit the scene at all (have I heard that song before? hmmm). (minus 20)
Square lakes. (minus 10)
1000000000 flower tiles in one level. (minus 10)
Dirt paths are perfectly stragith with NO rocks in them. does someone sweep these things or something..? (minus 10)
90% of the houses are the stamp-down issue predefined red house (not surprising! minus 20)
Trees with halves missing. (Minus 5)
Bridges for side walks? ugggghhh! (minus 5)
Square swamps with -COWS- in them. (someone cut them? since when do cows eat swamp weed? minus 10)
Inside of some houses are gigantic, many levels for one room (minus 5)
Total: Negative 110.
-NOT GOOD ENOUGH-

Stefan, having Geovanie as a playerworld reviewer is really wrong because he owns two playerworlds himself, and they are not good playerworlds. He would be biased towards his own playerworlds and since the playerworlds he's produced aren't good, his standards cannot be right.

oh, thanks a lot stefan :) we're building that world, soul blade is doing that, i'm doing inside levels, we're doing good so far, how is it ugly anyway? we're starting off just like g2k1, with a virtually black unnessesarly large map, and builging off of it, once you here out story, see how our time travel system will work, and see the new boat we made, you'll be very amazed :) our levels we've worked on are g2k1 quality (random grass, holes, geographical features, flowes, random tiles that look good, etc) we have a lot planned for murasamune stefan.

anyway, you just did wut you told geovanie not to do, discourage me... thanks a lot man...

That's enough, I do my job and you kids blow it all out of proportion. If you don't like my reviews then heres the solution.. simply don't read them. So I make mistakes, are all of you perfect? If so where is god and why isn't he holding your hand?

Plain and simple every one of you need to get off theese childish arrogant acts and grow up no matter what your age. And when you go around critisizing someone elses playerworld all it does is show your own stupidity and self centernedness.

In the in it comes down to me test new pw's and you complaing about it, or me giving reviews on the current ones, and you complaining about it.
Is there something wrong with this picture? No it's just human nature to critisize everything that everyone else does cause you think you are better then them or you want to be better.

All I ask is that I do my job and you pople accept that, if this continues i will simply post my reviews on here and furtur ignore any activity on the forums so i don't have to put up with this.

hey listen to stefan and stop discouraging everyone, gosh, geovanie is cool, back off