Updates im gonna make, Trees at bottom, better road, make it so its only 3 houses ;etc more details

There's an idea! :)

Nice. The only things i would change would be the grass looking tiles on top of the houses, and re-arrange everything. Try to think of what a REAL town would look like xD.

xd. i dont know what the setting of graal is lol :D i know its along time ago then they make stoves, and they still have horses that people ride, and they have cars lol :D

i need to find out how to connect trees

each server has its own setting.

When you hit "Select tile" in the editor, play with the tiles under the house ones that look like a tree. You will get it sooner or later.

o.o yeah, i keep getting a grass peice when i try :D

Heres my other version. please give me suggestions on the road and other stuff ^^

That looks much better. Still isn't the best level, but that looks way better. It won't hurt to even add a bit more trees, but don't over do it. Try to add some dirt to your paths, dirt always looks nice in levels.

<Edit> Some area's in your path don't look quite finished.. </Edit>

should i change the road to a dirt path? lol and ill take the table stuff and put trees :D

Well, you will probably need practice making sand paths. Don't use the path generater, then look ugly.. Try to make it by hand, thats why I said you may need practice. You can certaintly try if you want, though.

Also, i'm suprised that I don't see any tile errors in the swamp. Good job, most beginners make alot of mistakes in the swamp areas.

thanks, ill do those soon

heres what i have so far XD

NEVER USE PRE-DEFINED ROADS! EVER! Why? They look ugly. Only use them if you want to set up a layout but please do edit them. =[

i only have it like that for right now because i wanted to see what you guys think XD

Getting better. I've circled around your tile errors (red), and things that I personally think could be done another way (yellow).

There's a better tile you can use for the cave entrance which isn't so dark and matches the surrounding tiles perfectly, and those tables could perhaps be more table and less chairs. Just a thought O_o;

thanks, ill fix them soon :D

Yeah dude, don't use the path NPC. Try to make them yourself, they look a lot better.

I would try and stay away from being so symmetrical. Your level looks almost mirrored on each side, which isn't too great.

Bunch of tile errors, and too many predefined objects.

no, the houses are different, trees connect duh, and the tree houseand the bottom i cliff i need to fix

Learn to spell. Research and use other levels for reference. Think before you type.

What you need is:

A good layout.
Tiling.

I don't know why, but the under-average levels get the most attention :O

lol true

Maybe it is my computer...but I don't even see the main1.png picture. Does anyone else see it?

Not anymore...

This level is on a par with my levels. :)

? what do you mean

1) People want to yell at the person making the under-average levels out of thier own joy.
2) They wish to help the person develope their currently undeveloped skills.

I vote to close this thread. Its a terrible level, we get it -.-

I vote NOT? Whats wrong with keeping threads open? God damn why do I have to get so pissed off when I read these types of comments -_-

haha, people are soo harsh on these forums.. right just to cheer you up a little i'll put the right info that you should take in in a more positive way.. (wants the point about negative about it all?) anyway so I see you've useda lot of pre-made stuff and thats not really good to use, you want to make your level completely different to anyone elses.. also try to use tiles that fit with each other.. e.g. dirt paths.. then randomly put in bushes/long grass. try to also use less of those tiles and make it more detailed about what you're creating.. if you need some ideas there is a massive tutorial pack on my site of headtrash.net/graal (graalfanatic.xs3.com) if it doesnt work when you click or go to the site just try another time.. it was created by wandaman and its under heavy work.. if you cant find the tool just use the useful search site search engine. type in levels.

Well, Im coming back.

Ive been mapping on my 3 games ive made and ive done many things. Tell me what to make.

I don't really think that warranted bumping a 3-month dead post. (See: Hello and Goodbyes Forum)

Nobody's going to tell you what to make. You have to be creative and come up with ideas yourself.

I second that.