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Unkownsoldier 12-25-2009 05:13 PM

Lol, why are you making Rufus look so bad? kidding

coreys 12-25-2009 05:49 PM

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Originally Posted by papajchris (Post 1521155)
the images look good i like the blueish grey gun. Also, why MUST every GAT claim an image is unfinished? Is it so if it gets criticized you can say it's not done? Just curious as like i said every GAT thread has at least 1 image that claims their not done. Atleast though in yours the image actually isn't done

Because when someone gives constructive criticism the artist usually feels it unfinished, and needing the improvements that the person suggested. I would think it far worse if someone considered it finished when there is constructive input and suggestions on how to improve it.

Dnegel 12-25-2009 06:17 PM

I love the guns. ^^

Imperialistic 12-25-2009 06:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Liberated (Post 1547078)
Thanks, also made a 2nd one, which i think is a bit better, bit deformed again tho, and the eyes are messed up again.
http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...8&d=1261753782


Why do I get the thought of Rufus?

Liberated 12-26-2009 12:54 PM

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decided to practice some basic shapes first, i hope anyone can guess or see what this is.

Liberated 12-26-2009 08:42 PM

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'nother one.

tips, comments, critics, anything is appreciated.

Soala 12-26-2009 09:02 PM

I like this one better, because of better details
But there is still one eye out of place lol (I believe you just need to add a dark line around the white eyespace)

xXziroXx 12-26-2009 09:05 PM

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Originally Posted by Liberated (Post 1547303)
'nother one.

tips, comments, critics, anything is appreciated.

Nice lipstick right there.

Liberated 12-26-2009 09:13 PM

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Originally Posted by alexandralove (Post 1547304)
I like this one better, because of better details
But there is still one eye out of place lol (I believe you just need to add a dark line around the white eyespace)

yeah, it's not perfect yet, but i think it's anatomically way better then the other 2.

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Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1547305)
Nice lipstick right there.

Thank you, he uses the same brand i use. :p

Liberated 12-27-2009 04:44 PM

followed a tutorial for drawing eyes,
this was the result after the first attempt at the tutorial, not very good, but i was quite satisfied with it.
http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20..._powerpuck.png

an hour or so later i decided to give another go at an eye, this time i used what i had already learned from the tutorial, and only looked at the finished product for the tutorial for some reference.
It came out much better IMO.

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20..._powerpuck.png

C&C, tips, anything is appreciated.

coreys 12-27-2009 05:04 PM

Well if it's Male, the eye lashes need to be more subtle. On the bottom eye lid the eye lashes get thinner around the center of the eye, and there's generally a fold right under those bottom lashes where the eye lid is folding in.

Other than that, looks good :)

Vima 12-27-2009 05:22 PM

i LOVE the eyes! If I were to choose, I have to disagree, I like the first one best, mainly because its not so zoomed in as the other one ;)

Dnegel 12-27-2009 06:05 PM

The first eye looks awesome. :D

Liberated 01-17-2010 08:51 PM

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Bridge tiles, best to be used with Gonstruct i guess, or with graal when we can use layers.

Soala 01-17-2010 08:53 PM

Hmm not trying to be rude but your palette is kinda...odd

and btw where is my char doodle you promised me ages ago =O ?


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