Grass go in clumps. You need weeds, swamp, water, bushes, etc... in that level for detail. At the edge of the water it should be shallow water so it fits right... The waves are fuxed up also. The path tiles in front of our house shouldn't be like that because its a path bigh enough for one person to walk on going to your house. do't make all of the tiles straight or line up with eachother. Use diffrent tiles to fill it in. House is nice, add a door graphic :O

.. DID YOU HENCE THE WORDS "Only rate what you see" ?

anyways heres an update on the beach, i saw the ugliness in it myself

I don't rate levels, I give you people helpful advice to improve on levels. If you want a raiting then its 2/10

It wasnt helpful because i didnt want any help only rating, why did you post here, really smart zell, way to go :(

xXShakakuXx: Everything is too straight. To many of the same tiles in a row. Make it more jagged!

if you want to improve your 2/10 then I suggest folowing my advice -_-

jesus christ how ignorant can you get ? I only wanted you to rate the stuff that was there, not tell me what to do and what not, I kinda pointed that out really clear..

no.

Then 2/10

"Put your grass in clumps" isnt a helpfull advice, its anoying 0.o

No, acctually it's some of the best damn advice someone can give about level making.

trudat, i always say that lol...but the other thing (someone might of said this) the edge tiles, including the beach, are to straight, make it more curvy and less of the same tiles next to eachother.

I agree.

my opninion: 6/10

-4/10