slow it down some

Your run this town was better imo.

Everything is bad.

I hate auto-tune, its unoriginal. Only scrub-rappers use it, Chris Vimes requested it.
I can re-do it without autotune or those homosexual effects.

I would most likely like that better

So it's unoriginal. Only scrub rappers use it. And your best excuse for using it is simply that Chris Vimes requested it?

And you called him a doormat?

To be fair, though, even taking auto-tune off wouldn't save it. That's just one out of a myriad of reasons as to why this is so terrible.

Look up Swifty G, I'm sure he'd be happy to give you a few pointers.

The rap is a good freestyle I doubt you'd know anything about that though, your computer is too far away from clubs and parties. Wil freestyles which makes me think that it started as a freestyle and he decided to make it a whole song

Haha. If he requested I make an Era Song to combat's UN's and I obliged to that request, why wouldn't I go as far as intaking his preferences? You're such a dimwit, your petty attempts at a solid insult are pathetic.

I'd prefer you explain those myriad of reasons. Assuming you haven't listened to any music outside of the footsteps above your basement. Little turd.

I didn't know Chris has so much influence over you...

p.s. you called yourself a scrub rapper =(

So when Monty argues on the computer he lives in his mom's basement, but when you do it, you're still a straight thug hardcore rapper badass.

Before you call someone out on their life, take a look at yours:

you have to look at how many hours vs how many years the account has been owned, and compare it to the other person.

I laughed at the lyrics, but the choorus was odd. xD

honestly, good ****

I wouldn't consider a Graal-Related song "real" rapper hence why I even considered it. I can see that me smacking you with my genitals in the face a few years back has left them engraved in your cheek.

Racked those up since Era started, you probably have close to that with all your accounts, and you've been playing less than half that time. Interesting.

**** hours. Once you start releasing ****ty rap songs ABOUT Graal, how many hours you spent on it are the least of your concerns. At least there's a minute chance you may have been idling for some of those hours doing something productive.

As for Wil, you're asking me to elaborate on the reasons? Look man, I could pretty much just point at the entire ****ing song and say that's reason enough for you to stop releasing **** like this. I mean, I really can't think of anything that's -good- about it.

Your flow leaves much to be desired. Really lacks emotion most of the time.
The beat/song has no authority. It's ****ty. It's generic. I'm going to go out on a limb here and guess you didn't actually even make the song, so why couldn't you have picked one that doesn't suck? It's like the equivalent of elevator music in the hip hop genre. It's got all the elements, but it doesn't -do- anything with them.

To be fair, not all of your lyrics were bad. They weren't great, they were just delightfully mediocre. But randomly you throw out **** like "It's easy to hate me it's harder to love me.
You a hater ask ya buddies bet they all used to love me."

Whoa. love me...and love me? Oh my god. That **** rhymes. Clever.

The chorus, holy ****. Terrible execution. Climaxing squirrels in an orgy? Seriously, in what mental state could anyone have thought that sounded even remotely good? It's bad enough you used auto-tune, but you don't even know how to ****ing use it well.

I'd love to sit here all day in my basement and nit-pick at your sub-par (I'm being kind) rapping talent here, but I think my mom just made some popcorn and bought me some new clothes. It's time for me to make my weekly excursion.

Farewell, gentlemen.

Honestly, after reading this... Are we seriously comparing two average Joe's rapping about Graal to mainstream music? It's obvious this was for fun. This has never been American Idol it's Graal. I don't understand why there's gotta be so much fuss over this. If you haven't posted music, and/or you know you can't do any better then you have no right to criticize others.

I'm taking no sides here, nor am I bashing anyone. Just saying, drop it.