Here's my GS2 Tutorial dawgs.

http://public.zodiacdev.com/index.php?title=Fowlplay4

It's not nearly as complete as I'd like it to be though but it's getting there.

Your tutorial is pretty nice.

Indeed, it's quite nice, though it has a few errors that I'd be interested in correcting. I'll talk to him and see if I can get access.

I'm a web designer. I wouldn't mind helping design a new website if you guys are interested.

well, you can check out the thread here

The tutorial is shaping up well but it seems to have a lot of "This does this, voila!" and doesn't explain really why, some more actual descriptions of how things work and why they work like that would be good so that people can get a more rounded understanding of the scripting language from your tutorial.

Take for instance the section on clientside and serverside, it is saying how easy it is to split up your code and that clientside is insecure but it actually does not explain that serverside code is run on the NPC-Server and clientside code is run on the client, which is vital for someone who doesn't have much prior programming knowledge and is not already familiar with serverside-clientside programming. It doesn't explain the security differences really between clientside and serverside, and there are no details on how the serverside can be used to manipulate multiple players at a single time.